good chapter 2 opening?

“WHY DID THAT BOX DISAPPER? JUST WHY?!!” a tall man dressed in red yelled at the person who brought the box to him. “I don’t know why your majesty.” Carlton said shakily “GUARDS! Take him to the dungeon. Make sure he’s whipped.” the man said. “That was the Boleyn family treasure. All I know is the eldest Boleyn woman is dead. For all I know all the Boleyn women are dead.” Wilhelm said when stroking his pet crow. “But I need that treasure to get undefeated armies to gain the three other kingdoms and to rule forever as Emperor of Vader’s Empire. The Kings can rule over their kingdoms, but they will swear loyalty to me, the top dog.”